Fiction Snippet

I don’t have a problem writing non-fiction, but fiction is difficult for me. Really really. I’m not quite sure why. I think I’ll blame the Great Red Spot, because I don’t think it gets blamed for enough stuff.

I thought I’d put a link up to 1200 words of fiction that I wrote. I don’t think it sucks, and I hope to actually make a story from it. Hopefully someday I’ll figure out what it is about fiction that kicks my butt so.

10 Comments to "Fiction Snippet"

  1. March 7, 2008 - 6:50 am | Permalink
  2. March 7, 2008 - 9:40 am | Permalink

    Take your medicine!

  3. Monochrome Rainbow's Gravatar Monochrome Rainbow
    March 7, 2008 - 10:45 am | Permalink

    Wouldn’t it be weird if you could only get inspired to write really good fiction by doing something extreme? I could just picture someone typing on a laptop while parachuting.

    Or screaming ideas into a recorder while running from a bull stamped.

  4. MWT's Gravatar MWT
    March 7, 2008 - 2:43 pm | Permalink

    You started out pretty well last November before you got sick. What you need is a proper online cheering squad. :D

  5. March 7, 2008 - 5:01 pm | Permalink

    Gimme an S. Gimme an H. Gimme an A. Gimme a W. Gimme an N.

    What’s that spell? Shawn!

    Like that MWT?

  6. MWT's Gravatar MWT
    March 7, 2008 - 5:50 pm | Permalink

    *hands Nathan a megaphone*
    *waves pom poms*

    Shawn, Shawn, he’s our man!
    If he can’t write it, no one can!
    :D

  7. March 7, 2008 - 8:07 pm | Permalink

    Shawn,

    Maybe try something smaller first? Of course some people don’t do well writing short fiction, but I find it a good exercise.

    What I’ll do most often is take something I see, and then make up an explanation about it.

    Like this: http://klishis.com/notreally/archives/932

    I’ll also do the same thing for dreams. Take a snippet of a dream and build a small story to explain it. Like this: http://klishis.com/writing/stairs.html

    Sometimes they’re good, sometimes, they’re not, but I find the process very helpful for learning how to write dialog and describe a scene.

  8. March 7, 2008 - 8:08 pm | Permalink

    Poo!

    I’ve been moderated!

    That’s what I get for pimping my own writing!

  9. March 8, 2008 - 2:00 am | Permalink

    Shawn – you definitely have some good parts there… and short fiction is just fine as a place to start, although as I understand it the market is kind of tough.

    I like your buildup of suspense, your setting and the sense of mystery. Keep writing!

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